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Tim
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0 posted 2007-02-18 11:35 AM



Perhaps I am a whisper
that journeys here to there
from light to dark
to wake to dream
I travel everywhere
sometimes I speak in tongues unknown
to even me myself
sometimes I flaunt for all to see
sometimes I hide myself
but of one thing
I'm always sure
even if I do not know
of what makes sense
and what does not
is you are always there

© Copyright 2007 Tim - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2007-02-18 11:38 AM


speaking of "you"--I have missed reading You, very much.

Much enjoyed this, even if I am just "me" and not "You".

Martie
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2 posted 2007-02-18 04:01 PM


Hi Tim...so good to see you!!  

It is a good feeling to trust that someone will always be there no matter what.

I hope you will be able to stay awhile.   


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3 posted 2007-02-18 04:23 PM


good to read familiar verse


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4 posted 2007-02-18 07:37 PM


Well look who the wind blew in will you?  I loved this Tim, and so very true, that a constant in our lives surely will keep us "grounded."  Nice to read your words this day.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-02-18 07:48 PM


very nice words indeed!  thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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6 posted 2007-02-18 08:16 PM


but of one thing
I'm always sure
even if I do not know
of what makes sense
and what does not
is you are always there
~*~
This could speak of many
but that it speaks for you
is true among the common sense
and is poet
beyond compare

passing shadows
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7 posted 2007-02-19 07:20 AM


nicely written
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