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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2007-02-18 11:05 AM


She is gentle earnesty
satin zipless urgency
I suspect she whispers words
to herself as sacrament
as she furrows up her brow
a splotch of brown discernment is
in the summer skies-- her eyes--
she writes her poetry and cries
surprising,
even to herself
as forgotten feelings burst
like sparks beneath her fingertips
unveiling passion that still burns
as prayers upon her moving lips
demure as virgins blushing nude
sssssssssshhhhhhhhhhh
she's dancing poetry
innocent
provocative
Lolita dancing in the rain
oblivious to loveliness
revealing only shadows to
the few and very fortunate
allowed a glimpse of her.

* * * * *

Happy Birthday Sharon

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-02-18 02:58 PM


lovely write, Karen...

Happy Birthday, Sharon


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2 posted 2007-02-18 07:35 PM


You sure captured the very being of our Poet devine that is for sure.  I loved the "middle."  Now those words were the best dang part of the entire poem I gotta tell you. Loverly poem for Sharon #1.  Happy Birthday again, to you lady.-
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-02-18 08:18 PM



Happy Birthday, PdV....


1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2007-02-18 09:00 PM


how sweet
happy bd devine poetress

icequeen
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5 posted 2007-02-18 10:00 PM


What a beautiful gift... your talent is endless.


Happy Birthday P~D~V!!!

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2007-02-19 07:18 AM


beautiful write

Happy Birthday Sharon

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2007-02-19 11:34 AM


Shhhh....thank you (whispered - is this me you're writing about? that girl sounds so much better than I..sigh)...now go back to Mardi Gras!






Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2007-02-19 12:15 PM




HAPPY BIRTDAY SHARON!


scorpio
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right...there
9 posted 2007-02-19 12:45 PM


Happy Birthday Sharon!!
Hope you have a wonderful day!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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