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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2007-02-18 10:46 AM



Blissful Deception

Snow globe winter morning, gave break to blue sky
Warming trends most befitting, in refraction belie
Twill horizons denounce ever spring to be kind
In redemption, sweet promise, my heart yet to find
It’s cold, it’s cold

It’s still cold!

Copyright Kkh 2/18/07

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2007-02-18 02:10 PM


Gives warm wishes.
Magnus
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2 posted 2007-02-18 05:06 PM


Buh.....buh......brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

icequeen
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3 posted 2007-02-18 10:20 PM


How lovely this is..."snowglobe winter morning" paints such a gorgeous picture - and yesss how cold cold cold! 17 degrees here in FLORIDA yesterday morning, and expecting a low of 24 tonight. So it must be outrageously cold where you are!

Snuggle up with a nice soft warm blankie and some hot chocolate! Or come to Florida, where they are predicting 79 for the high by this weekend ~ as they say, if you don't like the weather in Florida, wait 5 minutes. It will change! LoL


Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-02-19 12:22 PM


well it's cold now here too, due to an arctic mass sweeping in from somewhere but at least it's not snowing

beautiful write

JL
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5 posted 2007-02-19 08:42 AM


Great write TD.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-02-19 03:33 PM





wonderful
and that last line is so perfect!

MoonShadow
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7 posted 2007-02-19 08:00 PM


Wonderful imagery... sometimes safer on the outside looking in.

           MoonShadow
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LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-02-20 11:27 AM


thank goodness it's going to the mid 30's here today

a very descriptive write
enjoyed this

SmartChick
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9 posted 2007-02-20 11:49 AM


Oh how I understand this one!
Enchantress
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10 posted 2007-02-20 11:51 AM


Wonderful write Kathleen.
Although we seem to be having a mild spell..
above freezing today..YAY!!!  

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

steavenr
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11 posted 2007-02-20 05:48 PM


nicely descriptive...reminded once again on a weekend trip up north, how cold, cold can really be...
vandana
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12 posted 2007-02-20 07:32 PM


good read
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