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passing shadows
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0 posted 2007-02-17 10:10 PM



And Nothing Gold...


In those days of my youth
I was dying
but blind to truth
I kept denying
that those times would end
the love will stay
I knew they were only words
now we strain to say.

I was always good at
putting my finger up to the sun
closing my strong eye
with the intention to shun
the inevitable break
in the cycle, and growing old
the love will stay
but as Robert Frost once told...

(in sort of a round-about way)

love, indeed, is as gold

and nothing gold can stay.



© Copyright 2007 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
icequeen
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1 posted 2007-02-18 11:23 PM


That is my favorite poem by Frost...

And as dawn goes down to day
Nothing gold can stay

Beautifully written, as your poetry always is. I will say that your poetry IS gold and will stay, in spite of Mr. Frost - he didn't know you.


Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-02-18 11:52 PM


thanks Caroline
The Lady
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3 posted 2007-02-19 03:19 PM




amazing work Dixie

"I was always good at
putting my finger up to the sun"


in our youth we all believe we can put our finger up to the sun

WindWalker
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4 posted 2007-06-22 12:32 PM


I really enjoyed reading this one!!!!!
FNG
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5 posted 2007-06-22 06:09 AM


it is heartfelt with a mix of philosophy

enjoyed it.

paullallady
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6 posted 2007-06-22 11:48 AM


A very deep, inciteful poem which really touched me. Your talent always amazes me.
passing shadows
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7 posted 2007-06-22 01:20 PM


bowing humbly*

thank you

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