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I want to what????
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I want to what???? |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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it's your choice you said to me as you set the glass down gently on the table in front of me scotch and water I believe it was as you looked deep into my eyes afraid to look away I stare back not knowing what to say your cards are on the table and I want to run AWAY....................... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
certain ones make you want to run and that's okay...usually a good instinct  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yep, you got me with this one. Hooked me and made me say "Yep, I understand you on this." Good poem. I like how you wrote it and laid it out. A |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
eager to know what happens next does she stay, or does she go? |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you for your replies... Robert~~~I think running away could get old However it seems to have become a family tradition!!!! LOL ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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