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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2007-02-17 03:35 AM



Thoughts penned for my first love tragically lost. (many years passed now). Somehow I feel he likes me/urges me to write about him!     RDB

I seem to miss you more these days
As recollections begin to fade
Of long forgotten slumber nights
And sun drenched hours of delight
I know I long for ways of old
I know I long for laughter new
But all I have are memories
Filled with no goodbyes from you
My heart still mourns your loss
It always will....


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (02-17-2007 05:50 AM).]

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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2007-02-17 05:03 AM


If you feel it, then it must be so.  Thank you for sharing.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-02-17 05:12 AM


thank you... that was a nice comment RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-02-17 07:13 AM


the heart goes on writing
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-02-17 07:15 AM


it does indeed my sweet friend Dixie.. thank you xx RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

trutodaraiders
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5 posted 2007-02-17 08:01 AM


sweet heartfelt poem my friend
HopeS
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6 posted 2007-02-17 08:03 AM


So touching and heartfelt

Hope

tracie66
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7 posted 2007-02-27 04:23 AM


This is beautiful, I felt the tender heartache and longing in this, so sorry for your loss, a love you will never forget.
my winged ~hugs~ floating your way, take care.
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



The Lady
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8 posted 2007-02-27 04:06 PM




Oh Roniece...
so lovely
and yes... he urges you to write
I believe it


steavenr
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9 posted 2007-02-27 04:09 PM


...and you do it so well...

"But all I have are memories
Filled with no goodbyes from you"

what a charming line...

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