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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-02-16 10:35 AM


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The long hair
Covered more
Than you’ll ever know

Like an artist
With a canvas for many years
I’ve made of you
More than you ever were

There is a whole . . .
Composed of dreams
Complete with chapters and storyline
Authored in the deep night hours

Which has as much
To do with you
As gold with lead
Good Earth
With Venus uninhabited

Yet always the long hair


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-02-16 11:39 AM


Beautiful!!!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-02-16 07:26 PM


wonderfully expressed John   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
3 posted 2007-02-16 09:48 PM


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Thank you.,

It’s now odd to think
how different
my life would have been
were it not to the end
for a relatively few strands
of dead cells

Thanks again,

John


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