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yvetters_24
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since 2006-08-27
Posts 52
california

0 posted 2007-02-15 09:37 PM



look before you leap
the deepths of my mind are to deep
for you to even fathom

so just step back
dont challenge the fact
that my mind is beyound your comprehension

just the thought would leave you confused
a day in my shoes
will revil the lie's that i hide behind these deciving eyes

the side of my the world never see's
the side i myself even despise

the contained hate
my fear that it will my fate

these depths of my mind i even refuse to explore
where eye meets eye
and i am forced to face up to the lie's

you think with just a look
you already know my whole life story

but the thing is
when you look into these fearful eyes
you dont even have a chance to penatrate this complicated mind



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Rottiestyl
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since 2007-04-19
Posts 60
Illinois, USA
1 posted 2007-04-23 07:20 AM


There is always a way inside the complicated. It takes merely time and an easy hand. Nice write.
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