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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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möbius strip of a night non-orientable turn it any way you like it remains handed planed one boundary component always the same ruled surface walk it if you like return to where you came from drag your heart with it matters not heartbreak night dark half twist merging never ending dammit! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh...ouch...feeling this...right here, yes, there.... tuggin lady.....  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oooh.... damnit indeed Lady Kate!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
hugs, miscellanea |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the all encompassing impasse, the mystique of a half-turned face to the upside of a downward grin... the right side of a left-sided stroke... the unimaginable tried. You outdo yourself... and all I can gift you is a sisterly  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Donna I knew you would feel it yup… it tugs hard thank you yes indeed Roniece thank you my friend thanks for the hugs misc’ I need them Karilea I can see you know the möbius strip the sisterly hug is all I need thank you thank you Dixie |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
You artistically paint a night that rotates the reader all the way around. Wow! ....now to more michaels.... always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady Kate What tricks the night and circle gives only to come around again |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Janette for this and all your comments ah Martie heartbreak nights would turn us inside out and leave us still unable to rest thank you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I agree with James -- fantastic writing. I feel you. A |
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