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Open Poetry #40

Her Sweet Critique

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-02-15 12:58 PM

             everytime i open my suitcase

i look for my magic flute but i find your bass guitar

               who do you think you are?

winning my heart when i told you i already have a chaffeur driving my car

why don't you take your delicious jar

                    of Sue Bee Honey

and visit some bars

             they have plenty of honeys

and by the way, your money's

                        not an issue

                                                        love,

                                                        eve

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-02-16 09:03 PM

you tell him Eve! money isn't everything!
nicely done Howard

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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