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Martie
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0 posted 2007-02-14 03:49 PM




I Could Say I Love you

I could say you are my hero
tell you of the bravery of each minute
movement through the door of coming home
careful consideration of small things
laughter seeping into words of play
the music of your thoughts in orchestration
of the steadfast way that you begin the day

I could say that I am new within your eyes
and the promise of my vows delight me now
for playful diligent percussion of the fun
where I’ve passed the growl of neglect
to find my new grown up silk gown

I remember the song of our beginning questions
paper wrapped and opening so much time
to see the distance first
was easy faster laughter
now I see it gather gratitude with thirst

That you hold me when I cry no tears
is only one of many reason dear
other is you grant me clumsy grace
to discover the everlasting in my face


© Copyright 2007 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-02-14 04:00 PM


you just put the sacred back into sacrament.

I WILL say I love you, sweet marite.


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2 posted 2007-02-14 04:11 PM


But you did say "I love you" ~ and with so much grace. Your Valentine is very fortunate, indeed! ~ as as you!

May Cupid's arrow always be slung straight and true!

Happy Valentine's Day hug,

Linda

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3 posted 2007-02-14 08:57 PM



Sissie...

minute minutes are s

and you know it!


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4 posted 2007-02-15 09:04 AM


I remember the song of our beginning questions
paper wrapped and opening so much time
to see the distance first
was easy faster laughter
now I see it gather gratitude with thirst

That you hold me when I cry no tears
is only one of many reason dear
other is you grant me clumsy grace
to discover the everlasting in my face


by definition, a beauty secret for love, remarkably this was like listening to the cosmos
Beautiful Martie

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5 posted 2007-02-15 09:11 AM



MartieSis~

"I could say I love you" ...
and you just did so BEAUTIFULLY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 2007-02-15 09:58 AM


Martie
Happy Valentine my dear.

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7 posted 2007-02-15 02:43 PM


Lovely...simply lovely! Brought me a tear, it did. That's how a Valentine is supposed to be.

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8 posted 2007-02-15 06:57 PM




Martie

you could say I love you
or you could write a delicious poem
that says it all

beautiful work!


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2007-02-15 10:24 PM


Nice...James
Rod
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10 posted 2007-02-15 11:38 PM


This is actually very deep....really well done!
Thank you.
Rod

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11 posted 2007-02-16 02:30 AM


i read this one twice..to get the full feeling of it...i hope i can write like this someday!!..
Excellent Work!.

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12 posted 2007-03-08 08:17 PM


Martie - what a wonderful love you poem - I am sure Taylor said wow!  Paul
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13 posted 2007-03-09 02:01 PM


Oh, Martie, this is so very beautiful. It touches the heart, you know.
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14 posted 2007-03-09 05:59 PM


How did I miss this beauty!???
Oh Martie...you say I love you beautifully!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

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15 posted 2007-03-09 11:34 PM


so glad I didn't miss this one of yours!


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16 posted 2007-03-09 11:54 PM


One word - magnificent. You have such an elegant soul.


Caroline

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17 posted 2007-03-18 03:07 PM


Dear Martie, I am glad I found this wonderful piece of yours!
Your way of saying I love you is SPECIAL!

Love,
Margherita

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18 posted 2007-03-18 11:43 PM


Truly beautiful and wonderful!
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