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Open Poetry #40
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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-02-14 01:06 AM


If my heart could tell what I really feel,
And my touch - our love could make.
Then our love would last eternally long,
And my eternal dream of you I'd take.

If my lips kissed yours and tasted bliss,
And my eyes - could feast on you.
Then our hearts could soar and dream as one,
And our lives would last eternity through.

If my soul forever remained astill,
And my love returned - long overdue.
Then our love not lived, would not remove,
The beauty that for me, was you.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2007-02-14 01:26 AM

just devine!!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-02-14 10:19 AM

this is beautiful
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