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0 posted 2007-02-14 12:14 PM


Let Me Know First Thing In The Morning (Invisible Valentine)
By: Noah Eaton
2/14/06
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If you get this kiss I blow from here,
from my balustrade, my sweet dear,
let me know first thing in the morning...
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If it’s your breath I hear in my dreams,
your tender touch that makes my heart skip a beat,
let me know first thing in the morning...
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Can you hear me speak,
bleeding my heart out,
cause when I’m asleep,
you’re all over me now,

cause I believe you are my invisible valentine...
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A first flush of lilac perfumed my sheets,
creamy serenades and moonlight that won’t recede,
and turtle doves that circle my head whimsically...
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...and I feel my heart has went from pillar to post,
finding my way to where you are, chasing a ghost,
longing to hear the chords of your unchained melody...
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Can you hear me speak,
bleeding my heart out,
cause when I’m asleep,
you’re all over me now,

cause I believe you are my invisible valentine...
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IT IS YOU THAT GETS ME ALL ELATED,
I WANT TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I’M DEDICATED,
I KNOW IT’S YOU,
STROKING MY LIPS,
FIRST THING IN THE MORNING...
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So can you hear me speak,
bleeding my heart out,
cause when I’m asleep,
you’re all over me now,

cause I believe you are my invisible valentine...
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somehow I swear you are my invisible valentine...
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"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2007-02-14 11:18 PM


Well now, sweet noah, first thing in the morning?

yer either horrified or gratified, depending on how ya spent the night!



Happy Valentine's Day cutie!

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2 posted 2007-02-14 11:21 PM


Noah, it's been a while since you've posted a poem...

and we're so glad to see you didn't forget us this Valentines!




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3 posted 2007-02-15 12:25 PM


So sweet!  Noah, I hope you heard from your Valentine!  *hugs*...jo
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4 posted 2007-02-15 08:58 AM


love swirls the atmosphere in connection...
beautiful roses you've sent here...


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5 posted 2007-02-15 11:31 AM


There you are! Gosh, Noah, it has been too long a while since you posted a poem ~ and you have been sorely missed, Angel Man! I knew that you have been mightily busy and that you hadn't really forgotten us.

Noah, you are every woman's sweet valentino valentine!


EA


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