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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-02-13 06:09 PM



God of Fun

I wish I was the one true God
and sat upon my throne.
Controlling all the people
in the lands they call their own.

I’d give them joy and happiness
and never give them pain.
I’d make their lives so beautiful
that everyone would gain.

I know I’d be all-powerful,
so the world would always be,
Exactly how I wanted it,
the way that pleases me.

I don’t think I’d take lessons
from the one who does it now.
For the way he seems to like it
doesn’t feel quite right somehow.

Maybe he’s attempting
just to unify his name.
Whichever has the nicest twang
is going to win the game.

Perhaps, I’d be called Allah,
though I don’t see why he cares.
Whatever they all call him
they’ll still worship him in prayers.

I don’t think he’s retiring yet,
this game has not been won.
So I better find another job
and leave God to his fun!

Ivor G Davies






The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.



[This message has been edited by ivordavies (02-14-2007 01:35 AM).]

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UseTheIllusion
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since 2006-02-06
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In a state of limbo
1 posted 2007-02-13 06:55 PM


If there were no pain, could there be pleasure?  
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-02-13 07:44 PM


ivor,
LOL at the stage humanity is now I don't think any one is up to that job. Enjoyed the reaf.

trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2007-02-14 12:26 PM


Really nice poem and message
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2007-02-14 12:32 PM


Greetings, Ivor! Perhaps God would appreciate some help! That's one onerous job that He has! The Universe is a Mighty big place!

~ You would make a divine helper! ~ and I think He would appreciate the comic relief!
~ I know that I did!

Namaste

Linda

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2007-02-14 09:00 PM


A job...is a job is a job.

What we might wish for

...who knows?  could come true.

Be careful.

And yes, I've responded several times to the emails.  Are they getting through?


ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
6 posted 2007-02-15 01:07 PM


Thank you all for your responses, I' think I'll stick to my present job for the time being....

Sunshine,

No I have not found your replies to my emails and cannot find anywhere on this site to look at email.  Help!

I can be contacted, however, at ivor@ivordavies.co.uk.

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