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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-02-13 07:39 AM



The sun quit shining
hopes light faded into dim
and then, you were there.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-02-13 07:43 AM


I wish I could come up with a poetic reply because this deserves one but I can't right now so I will just say "beautiful"


LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-02-13 08:50 AM


it is so nice to know that in those times when tears brush our hearts, well the comfort of someone who cares means so much.

Hugs

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2007-02-13 08:57 AM


Gentle Spirit
You are a delight.

sewasham
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4 posted 2007-02-13 09:07 AM


Such a pleasant feeling expressed in so few words. Hard to do but you did it well. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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