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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-02-13 05:45 AM



I seem to always be waiting
not sure exactly what for.
The past continues to haunt though
leaving traces of what was for more.

It's snowing somewhere, here almost.
The flakes misting high in the air.
I'm waiting to know what today brings
while the streets seem to me to be fair.


It's a game between time and the weather.
Or the whether or not the storm comes.
Reporters have nothing to lose when
they are wrong, while I twiddle my thumbs.

If I leave now I'm caught in the middle.
If I stay I may be late in the rush.
No matter the turn out on this day.
It will end in snow, ice or worse: slush.


M
*just waiting for the school closings...due to the timing of this storm which is just starting.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-02-13 06:01 AM


Can I send you some of our warm weather dear M???     wonderfully expressed!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-02-13 07:24 AM


hope you stay safe and warm either way


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2007-02-13 08:53 AM


If I leave now I'm caught in the middle.
If I stay I may be late in the rush.
No matter the turn out on this day.
It will end in snow, ice or worse: slush.


wull, if it snows today, I'm leaving BEFORE the rush...and cozy with a book...

hehe, smiles this was great!!!!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2007-02-13 09:22 AM


Maureen,
Good write and I know all about waiting. LOL

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