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Open Poetry #40

the brunt of softness

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2007-02-13 12:51 PM

in the night the silent voice is heard
and stillness activates serenity
the brunt of softness leads to spoken word

in quietude the lonely hearts embrace
and face the tumult of inactivity
as volumes waterfall in tepid pace

and trickle deep within the soul
as waves of inspired identity
teach them truly being one, they’re whole

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2007-02-13 07:30 AM

fascinating rhyming

wonderfully romantic theme, this is beautiful

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-02-13 07:48 AM

Lots of feeling flows in this little poem.
The image of the tepid waterfall, moving with such power...
Excellent imagery.

You describe a connection quite profound, when you write of a bond that transcends even silence. A rare and beautiful love.

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