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You are my Favourite Secret....
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You are my Favourite Secret.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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You are my favourite secret Each moment with you Ignites great desire Within You are my favourite secret With you I yearn Long moments of Time You are my favourite secret Your touch electrifies me Soft and gentle Always You are my favourite secret I don’t want to share You with anyone Soon Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (02-13-2007 06:47 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I once had one of those secrets but it was too hard on the heart beautiful write |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I like the form you used and a beautful message. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce LOL What do you mean with anyone soon? Good write enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this is from the heart of a lady in love... hope you have a beautiful Valentines Day thank you for sharing |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Secrets? My lips are sealed!!!! With hugs...JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
good for you! and good for us by your sharing |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So beautiful  JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely. Much enjoyed.  In the midst of winter, |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
Yes...... a beautiful poem! You do indeed write from your heart. More please!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you all for your comments to my work... much appreciated RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your secret will never pass these lips Roniece but it is a beautiful secret Happy Valentine's Day!  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Lady Kate! some secrets you just have to keep to yourself! Happy Valentine's Day to you! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a very sweet secret to keep! nice job! much enjoyed, miscellanea |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A beautiful secret for sure but it sounds to me as if you should shout it from the mountain tops. However, you've done it here and that's quite something. Well done! |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Beautiful Words that come from a very very lovely ladie. I wish you would post a little more |
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