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Open Poetry #40

Eighty Ninety Four

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-02-12 01:22 PM

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I really should be
Paying attention
To the road

Yet out of the corner
Of my eye
I see the sun
Rising from a direction
It never had before

So this is how
The heart responds
Not wholly without reason
Though a little surreal

The wind fans your hair
Whose strands astray
Fill the air with light

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (02-13-2007 09:07 AM).]

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2007-02-12 02:32 PM

been there, done that...boy o boy can I relate

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-02-13 07:40 AM

yep, that's exactly how

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-02-13 07:55 AM

Every heart needs to
be turned to such
a degree.

Well done, John.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-02-13 08:48 AM

know where your heart feels this....

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-02-14 04:29 AM

John... just lovely!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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