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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-02-12 12:23 PM



So tired of ignorance
what you saw me do
without looking
then why look if
it insults you

miss perfect....
why are you so unhappy?
if you have all that you want?
and why do you come uninvited
to hang around my misery

does it feed you in the night?
does it keep you awake?
wondering what I am doing?
are you statisfied with your using?

we never met and I'm
not eager to impress
he who can't make up his mind
so love my unfriendly visitor
the one you are with
before he finds what
he's looking for....


~~~kingsangel~~~

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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

1 posted 2007-02-12 12:41 PM


Wow! Perfectly straight to the point!
Well written!

Robert

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2007-02-12 12:44 PM


thank you....and I was wondering...why do make me smile?

~~~kingsangel~~~

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