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In Aimless Wander
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In Aimless Wander |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 Artist: Stacy Gold In Aimless Wander ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ A blustering gale blew down from the north, Flagrant winds whipped the warmth from inside. My life force was ebbing and slipping away, As well as my hope, faith, and pride. I had set out to seek my good fortune and fame, Having left the confinements of home. I craved adventure and a new way of life, So I left my safe haven to roam. My escapades were quite exciting at first, They were glittering, novel and new. I was vital, young, free ~ and invincible, And had many a dream to pursue. I eventually met up with the Devil, Who appeared in the guise of a man. My good senses were lost ~ and morals were tossed, ~ That's when all my troubles began. We were always in perpetual motion, Green grass never grew ‘neath our feet. All that we owned were the rags on our backs. ~ His promises had been lies of deceit. We never did find the proverbial gold, That he claimed lie around the next bend. He abandoned me on that ‘yellow brick road’, ~ I was alone without family or friend. But nor’westers continued to beat me down, I was penniless and had no place to go. I was aimless, bewildered, and lacking in hope, For the Devil had devoured my soul. I searched for a shelter, but none did I find, As I trekked across fields of ice. I was lost and alone ~ and longing for home, ~ My wandering had come with a price. “Happiness is a state of mind. Think happy! ~ Be happy!” ~ Linda L. Dowd [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-12-2007 12:57 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write here lovely Linda. With a lesson contained therein. Most excellent indeed.  In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel A fine lesson and a fine poem.   |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Shame on the Devil! Thinking you'll write him and his misery out of your life. Robert |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you! I had a decision to make and you just helped me make up my mind. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I am in awe of this poem. Your meter was awsome. I was at end before i knew it. A very very fine write *hugs* nice job |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A masterful art you have in mind and hand to fingertips and text. Greatly expressed. (But sad)…  Hug to ya! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh...this hit home |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Linda...I don't believe it for a minute..you've stronger than any darn devil!!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Nice Nancy! As I was writing this poem (that came suddenly out of left field  ), I was reminded of the title of the book by Erma Bombeck, "The Grass Is Greener Over the Septic Tank" ~Fortunately, I was very young when I realized the truth behind those words ~ which fortunately kept me out of trouble! lol  Giving you a warm hug on this frigid day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Thank you, Sir Sonneteer, for saying so! Loves 'n hugs 'n angel kisses, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Robert ~ Fortunately, I have never made friends with the Devil. Mind you, I've know a few men who were a wee bit devlish! lol  It was good to hear from you! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Angel4aKing ~ My prayers and thoughts will be with you! I hope that my poem helps you to make the decision that is the right for you! May God and the angels surround you with Love and Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
tru ~ Thank you very much, Bill! Your enthusiastic response to my poem is very gratifying! I'm still smiling after reading your reply! Giving a big hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JL ~ A sad story indeed! ~ and a far too frequent scenario at that! There is truth in the old adage that all that glitters, isn't gold! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dixie ~ Giving you a warm, compassionate hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie ~ Aha! You know me so well!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I eventually met up with the Devil, Who appeared in the guise of a man." happens so often Angel Linda you need a guardian angel of your own to keep those devils away... I love this  |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Another wonderful piece of work Linda. You make it seem so effortless. Flows right across the page. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
EA, Oh, how I love your poetry! Somehow or other, I think that most of us feel like we've fallen off the track at one time or another. Sometimes when I've been in that aimless wandering mode, others demonstrate their trust, hope, faith, and love of life that I lacked. In doing so, they provide an inspiration and fuel. (You have done just this many times for me! Thank you so much, Linda!) Mistakes can be a good thing, depending upon how we learn from them or use them. NO ONE SHOULD TRY to make mistakes, but sometimes, they just happen before we know it! One of the best things about making mistakes in art, I think, is they show me in great detail what I DON'T WANT! And sometimes... I am in awe of how a messed up canvas can transform into an unexpected piece of beauty through positive thinking and determination. Just wanted to stop in and tell you how I adore this poem. Matter-of-fact, I think I'll take it to the library right now. It sure has been nice to spend a little time on this "snow day" with you. Often,I think about you and my friends on the Blue Pages. Wish I could spend more time here... hugs and hugs, miscellanea [This message has been edited by miscellanea (02-15-2007 09:07 PM).] |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Whoops! Another mistake... I forgot to hitch up the horse for the drive to the library! The good thing? Another bump... in the road! BUMP! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A truly lovely write, Linda! No devil would dare get hold of you! Wish we had snow days here so I could read more poetry but that wouldn't help either with a computer that has resigned on me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lady Kate ~ We can never have too many guardian angels ~ spiritual or otherwise! Would you be one of mine? ~ and I will be one of yours! The Lady and the Earthy One protecting each others back! lol Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
sewasham ~ Might I say that I think that of your poetry as well! Thank you, Steve! Have a happy day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Miss C ~ As you are 'librarying' my poem, I am 'librarying' your phenomenal response! What a fine teacher ye be! Your students are very fortunate. ~ " I share with them how that painting had been transformed through problem solving and my attitude adjustment. I try to challenge them to make something from their mistakes." I appreciate you sharing your story. It had depth and an understanding and was very touching. Thank you! May this Valentine's Day be a happy one for you! Loving hug and smile, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Miss C ~ What a bubbly personality you have! Did anyone ever tell you that you are quite 'qute'! ~ and I love your sense of hoomah! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bunches of Honey ~ Hi, Helen! I wondered where the dickens you have been! So sorry to learn that your puter has "resigned" on you! That's the pits! I appreciate you reading and responding ~ especially with your limited resources! It was wonderful to hear from you! ~ May the Universe provide you with mana in the form of a new computer! Loving hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Island Man ~ Thank you! It was "nice" to hear from you! Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It does, doesn't it? *S* And so often, it's a price the heart, not the wallet, has to pay. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Linda, dear friend, you are a wonderful storyteller! This sombre tale holds great truth and is eloquently presented. Hope you are well, dear one. KBHBLY....lily jo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a fantastic write, Linda. Sometimes, we do pay a high price for our wandering. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern One ~ Hi, Belle! An "excellent" from you, is excellent indeedy! Thank you! Don't be such a stranger! It was good to hear from you! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ Aww, shucks, lily jo! You say the sweetest things! Are you still burnin' the midnight oil? Glad you found the time to stop by! As Elvis would say, "Thank ya! Thank ya very much!" KBHBLY 2 Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SC ~ Hi, Sweet Sue! In actuality, I've never been much of a wanderer. I prefer the safety and comforts of hearth and home. Besides, I'm a bit of a scaredy cat! lol Giving you a big warm hug, Lindq |
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