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grl2dream
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since 2007-02-10
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0 posted 2007-02-10 01:48 PM


Sidewalks

Broken sidewalks and empty dreams
My life ripped at the seams
No direction or signs to follow
I was alone and hollow

I didn't know where to start
When you walked into my heart
You found me standing there
and offered a shoulder to spare
I cried my last tear
And fought my biggest fear

With my love at stake
I've left myself open to heartbreak
I struggle everyday
But I won't let you get away

Something in your green eyes
Gives me butterflies
With that sweet grin
you steal the air within
Leaving me breathless to your touch
Your gentle words mean so much

Mended sidewalks and vivid dreams
Growing stronger at the seams
Things I thought I'd never see
You've lead me to where I want to be....


© Copyright 2007 grl2dream - All Rights Reserved
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
1 posted 2007-02-10 03:09 PM


Welcome to passions...I really feel you here...I was there too soon ago. I like your referene to his green eyes....I too know someone with green eyes that needs sidewalks mended!!! Hope you enjoy the site I love it!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2007-02-10 03:38 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Pleased to read you.
TD

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2007-02-10 03:42 PM


Hello and welcome to Passions In Poetry.
I hope you enjoy your time here.

I enjoyed your poem and rhyme scheme.
Hugs,
Ethel

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-02-10 10:53 PM


beautiful writing

welcome to Passions!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-02-11 02:06 AM


you steal the air within
Leaving me breathless to your touch

wow! a beautiful entrance into our blue pages - Welcome!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

DennisTheMenace
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6 posted 2007-02-11 04:23 PM


good first poem

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