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Open Poetry #40

Uneven to Beat the Odds

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-02-10 08:29 AM

Uneven to Beat the Odds

Pain
bringing me back
to reality:
what is missing, still is
the fill in the blanks _____
leading to multiple choice
with mind-thoughts essayed.

Words
can't feel
the bruises of the past,
nor the loneliness
that
opposes tomorrows'.

The ultimate
is there
for the taking
but
as always
lies between the lines of:
yesterday, today and
tomorrow.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2007-02-10 09:18 AM

Awwww Maureen, I know how you feel.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-02-10 02:50 PM

Sounds like Poetry 101.
Good lesson.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2007-02-10 03:00 PM

"what lies before and what lies behind us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us"
Quote by:
Ralph Waldo Emerson~~~I do believe~~~

I really enjoyed this one

~~~kingsangel~~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-02-11 04:36 PM

thank you, and AngelK I like that thought about what lies within us~~

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