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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2007-02-10 07:50 AM


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the soul staggers full


living becomes life's burden


time travel awaits


©2007 by icebox
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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-02-10 08:13 AM


yes, and in the end, starts the beginning...well done!!!!!  I'm smiling
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2007-02-10 10:00 AM


indeed
Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2007-02-10 10:18 AM


and it is all timing isn't it?

~~~kingsangel~~~

steavenr
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4 posted 2007-02-10 12:14 PM


so much said in so few words...loved the line:
"living becomes life's burden"

as for time travel, all I can say is "beam me up, Scottie"

The Lady
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5 posted 2007-02-11 12:51 PM




intense...

Honeybunch
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6 posted 2007-02-12 09:19 AM


Spot on as always, icebox.  
Robert Frazier
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7 posted 2007-02-12 01:01 PM


Yes!

Robert

Martie
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8 posted 2007-02-12 04:39 PM


icebox....If the soul is full
          what becometh after death?

       curiosity

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-02-12 06:52 PM


awesome!!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

iliana
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10 posted 2007-02-12 11:49 PM


This one I really like!  Sometimes....I think we don't have to wait to time travel though.  *wink*....jo
latearrival
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11 posted 2007-02-13 02:22 AM


And in the end we all hold that same ticket.  No one has a free ride, some pay more dearly and some live through it in a vacuum.  best to you, martyjo
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