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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-02-09 04:55 PM


                of course

you can play on my golf course

my Clydesdale horse

          is waiting outside

if we can ever understand why we've been inexplicably denied

    each other's Morse code

we could get to the source of this Bold and Beautiful episode

and find out why your heart's been so hoarse

without my curvy road

               guiding you



                                                               love,

                                                               eve


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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
1 posted 2007-02-09 04:56 PM




if we can ever understand why we've been inexplicably denied

    each other's Morse code

we could get to the source of this Bold and Beautiful episode

this depicts the story of  my life right now. Good work!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-02-10 04:47 AM


Howard... you are an amazing poet!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

howardtsu
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3 posted 2007-02-10 02:23 PM


thanks angel4aking  

thanks roniece  

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