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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-02-08 09:09 PM



Just Thinking of Her


When we're together
you can cut the
passion with a knife.

When she's out of town
just thinking of her
has to suffice.


JamesLee
08February
2007




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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-02-08 10:11 PM


awww...I hope you will be back together soon
DreamerSpirit
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2 posted 2007-02-09 01:42 AM


i got the feeling on this one..i really liked it!
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-02-09 09:39 AM


Well done, my friend

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-02-10 04:51 AM


James... just lovely! I hope it works out for you my friend xx RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-02-10 06:03 AM


'They' say, "Absence makes the heart grow fonder"!

Anticipation is half the fun!

aloha hugs,
Linda

LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-02-10 08:17 AM


when we don't have a thing, it becomes more valuable, remembering what we had and what it still could be...


The Lady
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The Southwest
7 posted 2007-02-11 01:29 PM




great James...


DennisTheMenace
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8 posted 2007-02-11 04:42 PM


hmmmm, not sure the knife thingie
howz bout dish it with a spoon
from midnight to noon

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