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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-02-08 11:18 AM



I dreamed of a woman under the stars
in a midnight sky so blue...
where love was a rapture
we two did capture,
our passions on angel's wings flew!

Our love was demanding, fulfilling, exciting!
The time was endless... forever!
Love beyond mortals,
athwart Heaven's portals,
such blandishments joyous and clever!

Love was dimension beyond time and space
with senses so richly relating...
continuum unknown, yet entered,
eternity's own being, centered.
On fleecy clouds soaring, elating.

Never descending, love's ecstasies bending
to wills brought out of our depths...
on fantasies, well richly reeling
with rioting, glorious feeling.
We ascended with grand-labored breaths!

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



© Copyright 2007 Bill Franklin - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2007-02-08 11:49 AM



E X Q U I S I T E ! !
Another keeper Bill!
Well done indeed.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-02-08 01:17 PM


very hot!
The Lady
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3 posted 2007-02-08 09:37 PM



hot and dreamy...


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-02-09 09:15 AM


LOVELY!!   Nice job Bill.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-02-10 04:54 AM


oh my! ooh la laa!!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2007-02-10 01:29 PM


Such passion and such ecstacy of view.
Enjoyed this very much.

grl2dream
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7 posted 2007-02-10 01:50 PM


what a romantic Great poem...loved it
trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2007-02-10 02:34 PM


Thanks everyone for their comments..
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