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ivordavies
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-02-07 05:41 PM




Grandma

I have a little grandma, she used to be a witch
She’d fly high on her broomstick and make it roll and pitch
And turn bad people into frogs and take away their gold
She says she doesn’t fly no more…..
I think its ‘cause she’s old!

She’s a lovely little granny and she likes it when we stay
She gives us sweets and tasty things and plays with us all day
But sometimes she is very stern, when we’re not being good
I don’t think that she’d use a spell……
Although I know she could!

She says that she has give it up, she ain’t a witch no more
But looking at the sky last night, well now I’m not too sure
For flying high above my house and lit up by the moon
I sure it was my grandma……
With her poodle on her broom!

Ivor G Davies

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It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
JeffD
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1 posted 2007-02-07 05:45 PM


Thats like I dream everyone has about someone.  I had a dream once that my friends mom was a witch and when I woke up in the morning I was too freaked out by her that I just went to my house.

I liked the poem very well written

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2 posted 2007-02-07 05:58 PM


My granddaughter read this herself, and said to tell you that it was a Chorkie, not a poodle,   and it was her Gramma.  Very cute, we saved this for their reading book.
ivordavies
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Chester, England
3 posted 2007-02-07 06:36 PM


JeffD,

be careful, some dreams are real....

Ivor

ivordavies
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Chester, England
4 posted 2007-02-07 06:40 PM


Mysteria, and grand daughter,

This witch was my grandma and our little black poodle used to go with her.  But I am sure she knows your gramma, as all witches know each other!


I'll ask my grandma to say Hello to your Chorkie next time she is flying your way....

Ivor

trutodaraiders
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5 posted 2007-02-07 07:16 PM


You make it seemingly easy to write about any topic
ivordavies
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Chester, England
6 posted 2007-02-11 04:28 AM


Tutoraiders,

I have problems in NOT talking or writing on any topic!  There are those who would wish I would just shut up for a while, especially at work!


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