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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2007-02-07 03:19 PM




This is for someone that for a long time I loved.
But does Love ever die?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

the fire blazed brightly
the feather down pillows
looked tempting
I heard you
over there
pouring the wine
I'd been watching you
hadn't you noticed?
when you thought
I wasn't looking...
could I tell you?
how your every motion
melts me from the inside?
and your touch
could melt me
a thousand more times
and how I know that
it isn't you
or I
so much more than that
somewhere where
love holds hands
with hearts
and 2 become 1
newly wed




~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (02-07-2007 05:42 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-02-07 09:38 PM


Julie.... what a beautiful write!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2007-02-07 10:49 PM


Thank you I am still trying to figure out the interpertation.....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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