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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2007-02-07 11:07 AM


Going out on a limb here... This is probably far off from what I was going for.

Dans l'Innocence, le passé est perdu. Parmi la seule vérité et contre la cote. Une métamorphose subtile.

Dans l'innocence, le coeur est perdu. Parmi les mensonges et avec avengence. Une erreur de négligence.

Dans l'innocence, le temps guérit. Le perdu et blessé, l'affligé et a excédé.

L'innocence A Perdu.


---English Version---

In Innocence, the past is lost.
Amongst the only truth and against the odds.
A subtle metamorphosis.

In innocence, the heart is lost.
Amongst the lies and with avengence.
A mistake of carelessness.

In innocence, the time heals.
The lost and wounded,
the pained and jaded.

Innocence Lost.

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-02-07 01:48 PM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-02-07 01:49 PM




marvelous

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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3 posted 2007-02-07 07:43 PM


I read something else on innocence earlier today that had an entirely different meaning...I liked this alot...

~~~kingsangel~~~

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