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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2007-02-06 10:54 PM


Tap and jangle
Hand to hip
A rhythm
A feel like something
Musical

A flavored
taste of something
mystical

You drive me
round the bend
Hold me off
the road
Hold me down
wearing thin
Wearing out
typical

and

Clever enough
I suppose
Handy enough
never
To lasso that though
until I
saw you pass
In a mist
a dream
a dazzling specter
Wonderful

Blissfully
wonderful

© Copyright 2007 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2007-02-07 01:00 AM


to quote you, this was truly 'musical', 'mystical' and 'wonderful'
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-02-07 04:01 AM


ah blissfully wonderful indeed!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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3 posted 2007-02-07 07:49 AM


outstanding
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4 posted 2007-02-07 08:46 AM



A whirlwind of smiles, this is.




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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2007-02-07 01:56 PM


Excellent write!
Write on!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-02-07 02:04 PM


felt like you were grinning from ear to ear...well, I was...enjoyed
Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2007-02-07 03:34 PM


And blissfully wonderful is your poem.  

~~~kingsangel~~~

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8 posted 2007-02-09 03:20 AM


made me grin something wicked both times I read it! bravo!
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