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The Sentinel |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
atop the ridge that guards the verdant plain a sandhill crane in silent watch surveys the bluestemmed prairie ever wary of the night, the dark and shadowed night of coyote's bite the Kansas wind blows ever hard and ever strong in nature's long seeking out of midnight's lone and sad refrain the moonless plain when suddenly into the black and shadowed night crane's sudden flight [This message has been edited by Tim (02-07-2007 08:38 AM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
excellent write with true bard-like qualities...just excellent |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, Tim! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have rustled a time or two with that Kansas wind myself nice poem |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you, indeed  ...Loving the visage, Sir Tim... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very well done, indeed! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this had energy and depth, hauntingly beautiful |
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