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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2007-02-06 11:57 AM




Prayer Seep
  ~*Marge Tindal*~


   There is a man
          of worded phrase
          permeating the praying space
          of my heart these days

   He would think it obvious
         that I would feel his vibes
         moving through the all of me
         though he's not by my side

   His thoughts reach out and touch me
         I willingly await the come
         for all he is ... for all he will be
         leaves me quite undone

   I know a man
        a special man
        who sees the good of others
        but often refuses
        to see his own

   This is a man
        this is a man
        that I would most often find
        seeping in at unexpected times
        to occupy my mind

   Loved is this man that I know
       and I am proud to say
       he is the friend of me
       in a most inspiring way

   Lips move in prayer for
      one man on this day
      I know a man
      a special man
      who causes me to pray

   And ... so I do
                   for me
                   for you

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2007-02-06 12:06 PM


Oh wow....this brings tears to my eyes. Thank you Marge, for this and for....lots of things.

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2 posted 2007-02-06 12:29 PM


Marge/sis...your vision travels so far beyond what eyes see ...I love this gift of love, and you!!  
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3 posted 2007-02-06 12:53 PM


Beyond beautiful Marge!
So very very uplifting.

Thank you so much for this
Love you, Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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4 posted 2007-02-06 01:02 PM


Margie girl darling one, an incredible piece darling one, as always your words fall like kisses on a soul, lifting the clouds that obscure light and bathing in true wonder. Oh how I wish I had one thimbleful of your talent darling heart

You just know I love your writing don’t you?
Love you always
like you forever
Mushy
x x x x x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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5 posted 2007-02-06 01:42 PM


Marge,
An inspiration to read.

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6 posted 2007-02-06 01:52 PM


Your words touch the soul deeply....Absolutely beautiful...**big hugs**

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2007-02-06 01:58 PM


1derful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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8 posted 2007-02-06 02:22 PM


Great rhythm and rhyme Marge..... Keep that poetic pen busy. Very inspirational.
Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))


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9 posted 2007-02-06 03:00 PM


this was stunning, and kept me smiling all the way through, cuz I know a man, just like that...smiles and hugs....

for such a beautiful poem

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10 posted 2007-02-06 03:16 PM


Such a generous and loving rendering, Marge.  *hugs*...jo
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11 posted 2007-02-06 03:57 PM


Dear Marge:  A lucky man is he to have a friend like you!!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2007-02-06 05:17 PM


Marge,

I feel the sentiment in your words, on very few occasions I have felt a bonding strong enough to transcend the mere physical and hold these feelings for another.

This is not love in the physical sense of things, but a joining of souls and understanding, respect for another, that whilst you do not always agree with their words you can respect them and absorb the reasoning behind their conclusions.  Look at these conclusions and possibly in some way be stronger for the experience.

A very strong piece of poetry summing up what spiritual friendship is all about,

Namaste,

Ivor

[This message has been edited by ivordavies (02-06-2007 06:58 PM).]

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13 posted 2007-02-06 06:51 PM


I feel the exact same way.  I love you Marge You have my heart. Your poetry is the most esquisite.


     Hugs Kimberly


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14 posted 2007-02-06 09:00 PM


A joy to read...James
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15 posted 2007-02-06 10:25 PM



awesome Marge...

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16 posted 2007-02-07 07:52 AM


Marge this is simply beautiful!
Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2007-02-27 10:49 AM



Sometimes words come ... because they are 'meant' to be shared ... this was obviously one of those times~

Daily ...
for you
for me
for the all who are of need~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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18 posted 2007-03-05 04:52 PM


   I know a man
        a special man
        who sees the good of others
        but often refuses
        to see his own

That's what friends are for, dear lady... to shove a mirror in his path. *S*

How I love the loving heart of you! *S*

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19 posted 2007-03-05 11:02 PM


And thanks to you, m'lady, for bringing this back. Wonderful then, wonderful now.....wonderful poem.

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Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2007-03-26 12:20 PM



SuthernLady ... and my RatMan ...

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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