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Open Poetry #40

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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2007-02-06 01:40 AM

... the end was in sight ...

                                ... the universe found it's edge ...

                                                ...

                                                            ...

... it claims amnesia ...
              ... but with ...

      ... it's old face ...

                                  ... ..........

                                                   ... rebounded from the ...

                                   ... distance ...

             ... the walls at the end of the universe are closing in ...

                                     ... it claims amnesia ...                    ... from the planets and the stars ...

                  ... and the last thing I remember is ...

                  .............  ...

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

1 posted 2007-02-07 03:50 PM

IS WHAT??

~~~kingsangel~~~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

2 posted 2007-02-09 05:22 PM

I WANNA KNOW WHAT IT IS!
Great job. Haven't seen you in a while. Maybe I'll come around more...

if you tell me what it is!

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

3 posted 2007-02-09 11:35 PM

I think I'd like it better if not for the interesting spacing you have going on. It makes it a little choppy, but I'm guessing that was the point. The words work though, good job.

Head Cheese & Chicken Feet

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