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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In a corner Shorn of joy— The cracked vase . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love your use of titles to express your meaning in your poetry. Indeed, the beauty is not just the imperfection but the means by which it reached it...by contact, by touching, by use? joy shorn is truly belonging born...great write...loved it... |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Steven, Thank you Actually I threw this in when I saw "Birchwood Lodge" pass into oblivion. Thanks again John |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John.... I love your words!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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