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ivordavies
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0 posted 2007-03-14 04:46 PM


Authors Note:
This was written about three years ago after making a deliberate decision not to take a promotion after yet another redundancy (some three years previous} in order to change my lifestyle.  After spending a few years, however, in jobs with a different type of responsibility, yes you've guessed it, I'm back running a large field workforce - but I have managed to keep the better mindframe this change gave to me!

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I used to be Busy…

I used to be busy, no time left for me,
my chosen profession would not set me free.
No time to spend with my family and friends,
I had to keep at it, right up to the end.

I climbed up the ladder, right near the top,
my time more consumed, the higher I got.
Sometimes I worked on, and got home real late,
if I hadn’t been there, poor profits we’d make.

I lived for my work, for so many long years,
the rest of my hobbies, they all disappeared.
‘Twas lucky my family knew only too well,
that just to survive, I must walk right through hell.

Then one time too many, they said your job’s gone,
they thought that like often, I’d opt to go on.
My record was perfect, they offered me more,
they couldn’t believe, when I walked out the door.

They offered a job with near twice as much pay
and better incentives, to try make me stay.
They said I was needed, they treasured my skill,
they’d give me the earth, if their job I would fill.

But my heart said that I should abandon the race
and let my life take a more leisurely pace.
To spend time with my family, and feel free at last,
enjoying the things, time had robbed in the past.

‘A change is as good as a rest’, so they say,
unfortunately mine did not bring any pay.
And sometimes I feared that I’d made a mistake,
to follow my dreams, and my job to forsake.

But now I have found me another good role,
without all the pressures that helped drain my soul.
I’m dealing with people, right at the front line,
but only when working it takes up my time.

My free time’s my own, for my family to share,
a quarter the pay, but I don’t give a care.
The bills are all mounting, and though that’s not fine,
I’ve now time for living, not crippling my mind.

It’s so many years since I wrote things in rhyme,
now I find that I’m doing it all of the time.
This helps me relax and with this therapy,
I truly can now let my feeling soar free.

If I had continued along my old way,
my head would have blown, they’d have took me away.
But one things for sure, that with no time to play,
you would not have been reading this poem today!

Ivor G Davies


© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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1 posted 2007-03-14 05:54 PM


love it, Ivor...and I believe sometimes  we  give up all that is really important in life for the money that is needed to live comfortably...there should be some happy medium.

M

Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
2 posted 2007-03-14 11:45 PM


Work can be a pain
But I know the score
Get up get promoted
From the shop floor

I went up real quick
Not too sure why
But I knew the trick
That any can try

The higher I got
More stuff got done
Sat pretty in charge
It was so much fun

My secret of course
Was how to say NO
Do it yourself
If you think you know

All ran like clockwork
With me at the wheel
Free time as well
It seemed no big deal

Life was a breeze
Didn’t have to be thrifty
To finish it off
I retired at fifty

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-03-15 01:38 AM


Ivor

I am glad you write the poems.

A

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
4 posted 2007-03-15 04:03 AM


Aziza,

Thanks for the support.

Ivor

ivordavies
Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
5 posted 2007-03-15 04:04 AM


Eric,

Looks like I'm not as clever as you...

Ivor

Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
6 posted 2007-03-15 09:30 PM


Nah Ivor

They always say a Lazy Person will always find the simplest solution.

When you are clever it often means you do more for less

Eric

Fairplay
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since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England
7 posted 2007-03-15 09:59 PM


I thought I was lazy I easily got bored
Till I woke up and smelled the coffee
I now make a point doing things I adored
You could all take this notice from me
We all have a conscience that others can play
To smart people this can be an art
So if you feel guilty it’s your turn to pay
Don’t get it mixed up with your heart
Just look at the logic why you and not them
Why should you do more than your share?
You could do the lot and then some as well
But believe me there’s none that would care
Your good turns and efforts are easy forgot
There are many more suckers than you
So when you are worn out broke and down
They will leave you and move on to “The New”
I learned from dogs I don’t understand why
If you beat them they come back for more
Just the same if you treat them kindness and all
So I wondered what just is the score
Life is too short to live it for all
While some will take all of the wealth
So live for yourself and not one and all
Just make the best use of your health

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