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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-02-04 09:57 AM



If you only knew
what you do to my soul
when your whisper breath
wraps itself around me

enveloping me in it's soothing,
tonal utterances of calming
that tell me you care

and that you are there
silently listening
to the sound of my heart

wishing to feel you again;
to have you near

whispering back
I miss you, dear...

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-02-04 10:22 AM


lovely words, Donna~~


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-02-04 11:20 AM


Gentle Spirit
An answering song from one bird to another.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-02-04 01:02 PM


beautiful
The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2007-02-04 11:44 PM



um hmmm
gentle Donna
plaintive and lovely

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2007-02-05 11:07 AM


gr8 write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2007-02-05 03:01 PM


Donna Dear, I found myself whispering your words of wistful whispers.

~ A delicate penning from your Gentle Spirit.

Loving Light,
Linda

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2007-02-05 04:46 PM


A gentle whisper of a write Donna.
Lovely indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-02-05 09:03 PM


Nice...James
steavenr
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9 posted 2007-02-05 11:40 PM


a very lovely write...beautiful words
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