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Kit New Member
since 2007-02-04
Posts 1 |
Storms come in destruction amasses and houses collapse in the ashes safe havens destroyed families torn apart like two ships colliding on an oceans tide leaveing us remebering when a brother was a brother in whom you could confide a sister a sister and a friend to the end when a Mom could be a Mom no one had to pretend now all that seems so long ago what happened to happiness? that's what I'd like to know |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kit, May I be one of the first to welcome you to Passions! Please, check your email for a very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes, welcome to our poetry community, and your poem has been a theme running in this forum for a few years now. Although I live so far away from all the devastation nature has been taking on the US, I feel it just the same with my heart. Sadly, people change during a time of pain don't they? Hope you enjoy the site, and I will watch for you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what happened to happiness? that's what I'd like to know Kit, I often wonder the same thing...guess we have to make it within ourselves~~ Welcome M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Kit. I much enjoyed your first post. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Kit! Welcome to this home of poetic kindred spirits.  The havoc and devastion wreaked by natural disasters can be so overwhelmingly gut-wrenching. You wrote well of this. Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Kit, Maybe I got it wrong, but I did not read this as anything to do with natures disasters, unless of course you class mankind as nature! I think this was a well written piece of poetry showing you despair with the things that are happening to people and families. There are some families that stay together, trusting and loving. There are some that split up, lie and deceive and eventually see the error of their ways and again unite. Unfortunately more and more people are drifting apart not worrying about the family values that used to exist. If this is written from personal experience I hope things improve. Welcome to PIP and I look forward to more of your work.... Ivor The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to the blue pages |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome, you will like it here  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Welcome to the Blue Pages...wil be looking forward to reading you again.... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kit...Welcome to our family. Enjoyed your first post...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kit... Welcome!! This was a good first entrance... we hope to see you often! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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