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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-02-04 03:37 AM


Seconds

Another sleepless winter night...
I'm counting seconds, all alone.
Obscure, just like the candle's light,
Are dreams of what is still unknown.

And, waiting for the dawn coming,
I hear your voice through misty thoughts.
My heart is torn; it's bleeding - loving,
And left unsaid is just one word.

The pearls of lonely, genuine tears
Are sadness only you can see.
I need, like air to breathe, to hear
You still believe... believe in me.

You're close and far; it's sweet and bitter,
My strength is you - your sorrow's mine.
My poison turns to something sweeter
With every glance of dear eyes.

© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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1 posted 2007-02-04 04:44 AM


I need this comfort that I feel in your poem..Thank you..the world is cold and you are not the only one alone.

~~~kingsangel~~~

A Beautiful Disaster
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2 posted 2007-02-04 06:57 AM


Thank you for the reply, I'm glad I could be helpful somehow.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-02-05 04:07 AM


I can relate
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