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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2007-02-04 02:31 AM


for so long a comfort
filled my heart and mind
guarding my dreams
all through the night
seemed like I'd never lose
my souls comfort zone

then like a thief
'twas all ripped from me
said to search
then I'd be free

into the darkness
to wise up to the light
seeing only twisted fears
in the twilight

recapturing the faith
that I thought I'd lost
knowing all too well
my souls too high a cost

~~~kingsangel~~~

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1 posted 2007-02-04 01:54 PM



Ahhhh...now, this, is a binding compliment.

Enjoying this.  




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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2007-02-05 11:04 AM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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3 posted 2007-02-05 09:53 PM



nicely written...


Enchantress
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4 posted 2007-02-05 10:15 PM



Very nicely penned Julie...much enjoyed!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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5 posted 2007-02-05 11:27 PM


beautiful, poignant write...enjoyed...especially loved the ending...
Angel4aKing
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6 posted 2007-02-06 03:08 AM


Thank you all for ooyur replies..I have been struggling lately...all my poems aren't necassarilly about me.....this however is.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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