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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-02-03 04:40 PM



Meaningless Words

coldness of the day
the warmth's sacrifice
deducting you to verse

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2007-02-03 09:29 PM



I feel this today M


Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2007-02-04 02:46 AM


Buuurrr!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2007-02-04 06:52 AM


It is definitely cold, here, my friend.
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2007-02-04 03:36 PM


cold here too

Thanks
M

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-02-11 02:15 AM


nice and warm here though loved this!
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2007-02-11 10:36 AM


I offer you the thought, that what is in the heart can melt the coldest of days.
Hugs,
TD

DennisTheMenace
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7 posted 2007-02-11 04:31 PM


Not zacly meaningless, not zacly a Hiku either, but close
I was told the proper response is another Hiku

Chill me up and down
Up my sleeves down my collar
Then warm with a touch

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2007-02-11 04:34 PM


I wasn't haikuing  exactly...was just thinking  how cold I was and all I could do that day was  write anything to verse...

been too cold to do much else around here lately..and thanks for the response.
Mr. Menace

M

DennisTheMenace
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9 posted 2007-02-11 04:38 PM


I heard dat
them florida people just don't understand

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