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Alliteration attained
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
Alliteration attained all the truth today "Willful water waves and so swans sway", she softly said with green glowing gaze "like leaves lace those trembling trees breath binds but easy eyes embrace" Alliteration attained unabashed undress Don't dare deny the breath binds best With wonderfully inherent interest insert instead a versatile verse ............................... ............................... ............................... ...into nothingness..... ............................... ............................... ............................... This is my request fill that emptiness and make the rest of this poem yours. "I wanna bleed Show the world all that I have inside I wanna scream Let the blood flow that keeps me alive" Bleed by Cold [This message has been edited by Triskaidekaphobia (02-02-2007 11:04 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have nothing to fill it with  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I often find that the use of alliteration gives a lyrical quality to poetry. I use it often in my own writing. I enjoyed reading your use of it.   EA |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Tris...Enjoyed. Very alive and touching. Good write...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Somebody New Member
since 2007-02-17
Posts 4 |
Really, speaking about poetry, I’ m mostly in the role of reader. I like sometimes to visit this site and read the poems, I’m grateful to everyone posting their poems here. At very rare moments I feel inspired to compose something sort of a poem. I want to say to Triskaidekaphobia that I do like your style of writing the poems. Keep hope you’ll carry on posting your poems here and I can read your next poem soon. Your poem Alliteration attained inspired me write some lines filled that emptiness; and answering your request I’ve made the rest of your poem mine. Unlooked-at unbudded red rose negates new-blown velvet vernation converted by cursed powdery mildew into nothingness of nepenthean prostration piercing a pearly grey gauze girding the swaying swan lake location |
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