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Open Poetry #40

Her Secret Service

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-02-02 01:32 PM

                      is their an answer to the puzzle

why a dancer so willing to guzzle her charm

                              can't romance her

into solving the Rubik's Cube that says he can't walk arm in arm

                              with his soulmate?

                                                             love,

                                                             howard

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2007-02-02 08:01 PM

Brilliant. I loved the format, and its a new take on things, concernign poetry. I loved the comparison the the rubiks cube. I hate those things.

Nice work, I'd leave it as is!!

-Paul

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2007-02-02 09:51 PM

Your secret is SOLD my friend....

~~~kingsangel~~~

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

3 posted 2007-02-03 01:47 PM

thanks paul

thanks kingsangel

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