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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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The cold makes me brittle and I take chances that might break me. But really what is life without some broken parts because broken parts make noise and I want you to hear me coming so you can run if you're scared. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
~AHO~ PassingShadows,it is no life without the chances,there is no true joy without the hurts,there is no knowing safety without facing dangers. Live sister,laugh,sing,dance,and cry,it is this tells you, you are alive and learning! blessings granny
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehehe, can't tell you how this made me smile...sometimes I find myself being purposely abrasive, just to see if they will run, and....they usually do...hehe and they stay only if things are easy...no responsiblity, nothing or no one to answer to...can't feel good about themselves unless they are in the arms of a woman????? Go figure...but believe me, there are men out there who are very confident, aware, and desire the same things you do....good solid, men who know the word fidelity....love to you smiles and hugs...for a wonderful write |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Cahnces and choices...if only I had made the right choice at the right moment of chance Ihear you girl!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks ladies Lee, I knew this would make you smile  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"because broken parts make noise and I want you to hear me coming" really loving this one Dixie... |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Even when your silent i see the glint of gold from your wings coming. All here to listen even when i'm silent. "The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it  Well writ! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie.... you rock! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each I appreciate the comments |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I've come to realize that all the broken parts become pieces of who we are. Of course that is easier to say when you are looking back on things, not when those parts are being broken lol. --Tara |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great write...lots of thoughts worth thinking...blown away by the ending...I needed this tonight...thanks... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm 'way past fear....but I sometimes run for fun -- does that count? ....and of course, Rattled would be my last name, or three-fourths of it, more or less....I think I'm home free! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
SHORT & SWEET... I loved it, Miss Dixie!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Run if their scared and smile if they're not...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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