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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-02-02 09:03 AM


Bright Haiku

The earth turns around
And the sun now walks the ground
Gone the gems of night


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Enchantress
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1 posted 2007-02-02 09:15 AM


Perfect!  I love this one Sy.
And...if we wait it will do it all over again!
Exciting!
& , Nancy


In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-02-02 10:11 AM


Nancy
Thank you sweet.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-02-02 10:29 AM


perfect!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-02-02 11:47 AM


passing,
Two perfects WOW

LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-02-02 12:24 PM


Beautiful

are you and yours ok?

Hugs and best wishes
Lee J.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-02-02 12:34 PM


LeeJ
Yes we are fine thank you.

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7 posted 2007-02-03 11:33 AM


It doesn't surprise me that you do these haikus so well. I am glad you are okay.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-02-03 02:44 PM


SmartChick,
Thank you sweet stuff.

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2007-02-03 04:46 PM


but I do love those gems of night~~


M

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2007-02-03 05:09 PM


Maureen,
So do I.

ivordavies
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11 posted 2007-02-03 06:05 PM


the lost gems of night
when rotated from your sight
become our nightlight

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-02-03 06:31 PM


ivor,
Good one I like it.

vandana
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13 posted 2007-02-03 06:35 PM


nice read
The Lady
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14 posted 2007-02-03 09:44 PM



Oh excellent Sir Sy...


Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2007-02-03 11:01 PM


vandana,
Thank you dear.

Lady,
I appreciate your comment.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2007-02-10 05:30 AM


Sir Sy.... just lovely!   RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2007-02-10 08:23 AM


RDB,
Thank you for digging ths up.

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