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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2007-02-01 02:15 PM


Day is done
gone the sun
Soon you will fade into slumber
Moon rise high
into the sky
Assembling stars will outnumber

Like a child
find a first star
Gathering wishes up
send them afar
Till there's nothing left to do
I send this wish to you

Say it's true
You love me,
Like I love you

~~~~

Years fly by
memories die
Soon you will find Life's slumber
On a whispering wind
all over again
When starlight streams in your window

Like a child
find a first star
Gathering wishes up
send them afar
Till there's nothing left to do
I send this wish to you

Say it's true
You loved me,
Like I love you


© Copyright 2007 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2007-02-01 02:27 PM


Robert...this is really beautiful and should be made into a card for your loved one.  It is that time of year...but then, any time is that time.  
Sunshine
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2 posted 2007-02-01 04:58 PM



I have to echo my sissie here...

I think this is a wonderful opportunity
to create by hand that special poem...

it may even garner a very special moment!



Welcome home, Robert!


passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-02-01 07:46 PM


I read this earlier...needed to read it again

thanks for sharing and welcome back

Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2007-02-03 02:21 PM


Love is often times not returned..loving the one your with is overrated.....i am sure if the love is true love will come back to you.

~~~kingsangel~~~

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2007-02-03 04:50 PM


very nice wishes~~

M

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2007-02-03 11:27 PM


say you love me
...like
i
love you

passing shadows
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7 posted 2007-02-05 04:13 AM



LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-02-05 07:41 AM


a very pretty poem....
Robert Frazier
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9 posted 2007-02-05 10:47 AM


Thanks all.

H, it's true

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