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JLHunter
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0 posted 2007-02-01 08:06 AM


The Sun Trilogy, Part II

Winter Sun


Ice crystals, gem-like,
Reflect the weak sun's promise--
Life will stir once more!

Ice water cascades,
Seeping down to dormant seeds,
As the sun peeks out.


I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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1 posted 2007-02-01 08:20 AM


John~
The waters of Winter bring the promise of Spring~

I can hardly wait for Spring to arrive~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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JLHunter
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2 posted 2007-02-01 09:20 AM


Hi again, Marge!

You're my bestest fan!  Thanks for your kind comments...

Love, John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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3 posted 2007-02-01 08:04 PM


The sun has been playing
peek-a-boo all day between
clouds and clear blue skies...

these are so welcome!


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4 posted 2007-02-01 08:22 PM


  Bravo John!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JLHunter
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5 posted 2007-02-01 08:40 PM


Hi again, Sunshine!

I hope that your blue skies return for a while, just as in Part III!

Thanks for the nice words.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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6 posted 2007-02-01 08:41 PM


Thanks, RDB!

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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7 posted 2007-02-02 05:13 PM



the promise of spring

so lovely John

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