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JLHunter
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0 posted 2007-02-01 08:04 AM


The Sun Trilogy, Part III

Springtime Sun


Cowed no more, the sun
Celebrates its resurgence,
Banishing winter.

Sun and life abound!
Riotous colors burst forth,
Shouting springtime's joy.


I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

© Copyright 2007 John L. Hunter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-02-01 08:22 AM


Ah...John~
This is my kinda weather ... and my kinda poetry~



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~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2007-02-01 09:21 AM


Hi, Marge!

My last piece...  I'm glad that you felt it wrapped up nicely.

Love, John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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3 posted 2007-02-01 01:42 PM


JL...I read all 3 parts and really need the Sun to shine on me. I'm tired of so much rain. Enjoyed your Trilogy...Paul

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Paul

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loved each one! nicely done!
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5 posted 2007-02-01 08:06 PM


Sitting 'neath dark skies
Awaiting the fall of flakes
I wonder of warmth.

~*~

Now, see?  You've inspired!

Well done, JL


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6 posted 2007-02-01 08:08 PM


Hi, Paul.

I was attempting to spread a little sunshine with Part III, so I hope it helped.

Thanks for writing.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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7 posted 2007-02-01 08:09 PM


Hi, Shadows.

Thanks for saying so.  I worked hard to wrap it all up in this part.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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8 posted 2007-02-01 08:11 PM


Hi, Sunshine.

Is it snowing again?  If it is, I'm sorry to hear it.  Maybe you can glean a little sunshine from this write.

Oh, and nice 'ku.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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9 posted 2007-02-01 08:24 PM


wow!!  you are wonderful with your words John!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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10 posted 2007-02-01 08:43 PM


Thanks for saying so, RDB.

I was hoping to spread a little sunshine.  I hope you felt that!

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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11 posted 2007-02-02 05:15 PM



I can smell the new life John

well done!!

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12 posted 2007-02-03 05:29 AM


enjoyed your trilogy John...we are under the snowflake skies of Winter at the moment...
waiting for a touch of Spring to return.(Groundhog says sooner than later )

M

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