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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2007-01-30 09:12 AM

Seams of Dreams

My ID has seamed a seam of dream
A deem of symbols bind the theme
It patches up a memories fade
A thatch was made within a glade

She stays there still by force of will
My princess waits in lace and frill
Creation of a minds believe
An Eden and an Eves conceive

A mixed bag of the now and then
A frau to fill my yin and yen
A phantom of duplicity
One made of my complicity

My answer to the evermore
Untouched by time forevermore
But I was wrong this thing of seem
My ID still seams this time worn dream

But now I know will come an end
Where time and sand will make it blend

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-01-30 01:16 PM

"But now I know will come an end
Where time and sand will make it blend"

Nice write Seymour.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-01-30 06:09 PM

you lend a cumulative resonance to many images, giving persistence to the philosophical

I'm always left a little more diverse after reading you...

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-01-30 08:31 PM

Beautifully done Sir Sy
I love the "yin and yen" wordplay...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2007-01-30 08:37 PM

JL
Thank you, thank you.

LeeJ
I love flattery.

Lady
You are a dear.

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

5 posted 2007-01-30 10:08 PM

~AHO~ Seymore Tabin the dream love that came true,the beauty shines through though you try to hide. She is there forever in your mind,sweet,young and forever free!

granny!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2007-01-30 10:13 PM

Wonderful write dear Sy!

&

Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2007-01-30 10:18 PM

Sir Sy.... yes it seems I like this!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2007-01-30 11:14 PM

wredgranny
Thank you you understand.

Nancy
Thank you sweet.

RDB
Thank you for the seem.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-01-31 04:48 AM

Greetings, Mr. T.

Your word stitches are seamless!

~ May the sands of time bring you the sweetest of dreams!

Giving you a goodnight

EA

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2007-01-31 07:17 AM

Like sands through the hourglass, these are the ways of your words. Always there is a resonance within me.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2007-01-31 08:10 AM

Earth Angel
With your

I had a wonderful night.

Kethry
It is the resonance that speaks, thank you

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2007-01-31 10:13 AM

Sir Sy, well writ

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2007-01-31 11:10 AM

Interloper
Than you, thank you.

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