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Open Poetry #40

Too Much Sake

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-01-29 09:59 PM

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It is terrible
To love without response

To see instead
The somewhat bored
Gesture of posture
Limned with a certain confidence
That all if not for all
Will turn out for the best

A young girl
In her heart
Again, offers all she has

And once again
Must accept instead

Ashes
Where roses lived

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icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

1 posted 2007-01-29 10:13 PM

I envy your talent, truly. You make words become living, breathing things, alive in my head.

It is awesome!

Caroline

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2007-01-29 10:32 PM

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Caroline,

Thank you,

In Vino Veritas,
Or in this case, Japanese rice wine,
which in this instant reveals , as it has always been,
that I am, (condemn him to Hell), a romantic.

Let this be a secret,
for in truth as such
I am vulnerable . . .

Thank you again,

John

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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2007-01-30 12:29 PM

Poignant is too weak a word for this. Excellent work here, excellent and empathic in a loving way.

Jane looks down at her organdy skirt.....

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-01-30 07:28 AM

a romantic indeed
your secret is safe

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